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Title: Part One Reviewer: mmooch Signed
Geez, I think Anya rubbed off on Buffy there at the end. Poor Xan, all alone in his single room.
Date: 07/12/10 - 03:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Part One Reviewer: Queen Boadicea Signed
This is a fine addition to the B/G fanon. However, you use the word "women" when mean "woman" "whimp" when you mean "wimp" and "spicket" when you should write "spigot." Also something went wrong and you put all these sentences in italics. I'm certain you didn't ment to do that and perhaps you should fix it when you add the other chapters.

Author's Response: thank you Queen Boadicea, for bringing my attention to these problems. it is greatly appreciated. =)
Date: 23/01/04 - 04:33 am [Report This]
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